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Re: Project Thirteen - Intro
Thank you for your help. :) This story is growing very quickly, and I will definitely be expanding a lot on Blanc's departure. ;) I have my entire plotline pretty ...
May 13, 2013 -
Re: Project Thirteen - Intro
Oh my. :D Thank you so much. English isn't my first language and as a result pacing is often a problem for me - I'm so glad that you found ...
May 12, 2013 -
Re: The Brave One
It's very short but sweet, although the last line - "and how not to be dead" - seems out of place to me. It's much more passive than the rest ...
May 12, 2013
