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  • Romantic Novels Re: Vampire's Mansion Chapter One

    (This is a story I wrote because of my dreams. I have read the Twilight series, and I started this way before I had even heard of them. Its not ...

    Sep 1, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Andrea Rider

    I won't quote like everyone else did. They pretty much wrapped it up. You do know how to write, and well. Just put your story in Word and try and ...

    Sep 1, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Legacy, the Chase, My Life chapter one part one

    What's the plot to this story? It sounds like you took half of chapter one and threw it on the site. I mean, you're writing's good, but you need to ...

    Sep 1, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Never Found Chapter One

    (This is my newest story, Never Found. Please enjoy!) Chapter One When she opened her eyes, she had no idea where she was. She was weak, and her arms were ...

    Sep 1, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: I'm New and SHY!

    I'm gonna post my story right now. Look under the Action fiction forum.

    Sep 1, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: Dead

    I can't say I cried. I never cry during books. But this needs some more mourning. As quoted by Gail Casron Levine, "MAKE YOUR CHARECTERS SUFFER!" I need details! I ...

    Sep 1, 2008
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Avian Nights (Chapter One-- Waking Dream)

    I like it. Its really good. I want to read the next chapter! You left me hanging! These are one of those stories I would stay up late at night ...

    Sep 1, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: I'm New and SHY!

    I write fiction romance. Sometimes I stray off track and it becomes action. But almost always someone falls in love behind the story. I don't know if that's exactly romance, ...

    Sep 1, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: I'm New and SHY!

    I write fiction/action/romance kind of stuff. I'm Shadow. I've been roaming around as a guest for a while and reading people's stories. They're good.

    Sep 1, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: I'm New and SHY!

    All my friends write, but they think my stories are the best! I never get any critism! And one of my friends writes so well that I'm not very sure ...

    Sep 1, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Survivor

    Are you sure this is your first attempt writing a story? My first attempt was two sentences per chapter. Very nice! I've seen people who've written for most of their ...

    Sep 1, 2008


I will call them my people, which were not my people; and her beloved, which was not beloved.
— Romans 9:25