shadowed_mist

Hello, Skittles. The pier view below my apartment window was brilliant. The small cramped room with a musty bed and an unbalanced desk was everything a writer could ask for. ...

You have the usual problems that every writer suffers: grammer!!!!!! How many times do I have to tell you?! You're driving me mad! Other then that, the story is very ...

I love this story so much! My favorite is the old professer who ke[t falling asleep... I'm not the best reviewer, but I'm going to try my best. The description ...

The Prologue isn't really supposed to make any sense, and i didn't spend too much time on it because it was just a way to introduce the main character: the ...

Did you press 'eject' when you pulled it out? Sometimes that destroys the file.

(pardon me for the shortness. I wasn't paying much attention to it at the time.) The village of Velio was silent as the sun set. All the shops were closed ...

(Second chapter. Enjoy the lies. It's also kind of long, so if you're like SOME PEOPLE WHO DON'T LIKE READING LOOOOOOOONNNNNNNGGGG REVIEWS, please don't even comment. Thank you for your ...

I love it. It's amazingly amazing and surprisingly familiar. I like it how Latios is a vampire, but that didn't surprise me. He seemed like the vampire type. I hate ...

(This is one of my more humorous stories. Please critique, for my friends are annoyed with my endless novels.) Have you ever heard the rumors that you are reborn depending ...

Thanks for everyone's support on this story. I have finished it, I just haven't posted the story because I'm starting to get serious about getting it published. I'm not allowed ...

Amazing! I love it! Keep writing, its amazing! some gramatical errors really ticked me off, but those can be easily fixed! I liked how you made Death someone people wouldn't ...

The reason the boy could see Ashy is never explained. Its just an oddity in the physical world. I think I might explain it someday.... I know its cliche, but ...

“Whenever I freeze up like that, it means I haven’t taken anyone in a couple of minutes. They get longer the more I wait, and I see all those souls ...

Yes, you're grammer really is bad. Luckily, my friend's grammer is even worse than yours and I managed to decode the story. Nice second chapter. A couple things I would ...

“Where are we going?” Ashy asked Death as he led her away from the storage rooms. “To tell the Big Guys that you’re going to be my apprentice.” Death murmured. ...