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Re: Simplicity
I really like this poem is good and simple. The words give a good vibe of rythem, and kinda remind me of simple times, so I give you two thumbs ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: One God
If life were so simple, why would the bitter rage continue to stay ? As if my attiude define who I was. But I know there only one judge,one opinion, ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: On the other side of the world
Wow, I really enjoyed reading this poem! You can feel the emotion and the passion, I can tell you put your heart and soul into this poem, that what real ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: Bloody Tears
The red tears that spill from my eyes, are filled with boiling blood and painless lies, as if I were bleeding with emotionless sorrow. As if I a was fearless ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The Darkest Passion
The hardest battle to win are the ones , when you feel heartless towards your family and friends. The coldest nights are the ones , when you feel you lost ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Cold Anger
Thank u all for the advice it really seem to help
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Cold Anger
Rage is a sickness full of brutal anger and dark desires. Attiude is a heartless emotion vowed to stand up and speaked with honest disrespect. Neglection is a painless fear ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: A War of survival
Survival is the struggle. Trust ,is the will of life. The rath of God ,is the hero of christ. The power to choose . The path of a golden knight ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Rewind
thank u for all the commets
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Rewind
The past is a dark palce to be Like a stormy night that you wish would just go away As if a tornado came down and destroyed everything ! And ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Who Am I
im sorry i said that ok im just alittle pist but seriously i do not have a very good grammer please just say u dont like in instaed of telling ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Who Am I
Mod: Removed due to swearing outside of literary works.
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: I wonder Why
I wonder why i cry somtimes i cry when my mother said she hates me i cry when my dad yells at me i cry when my older brother never ...
Apr 21, 2011 -
Re: deleted
yea i hate writes block but actaully that was a awsome poem i like it i mean wow u had writer block u wrote that awsome keep writing even if ...
Apr 21, 2011 -
Re: So They Say
SHOOT BETTER WRITER THAN ME LOL KEEP WRITING AWSOME POEM DO WHAT U DO BEST LOL K LIKE I SAID AWSOME POEM
Apr 21, 2011
