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edited, bump. ^^

Khistopher (I hope this is okay, it was really the only place I saw her reappering. ^^) Perhaps it's not odd that it's Khistopher that finds him there. After all, ...

Thanks, guys, I'll correct what you mentioned when I get the chance. Thanks for the critique, and going over it I can see where the chances you mentioned need to ...

Wow, this really makes me want to read the entire story with this character in it! Your writing is nice to read and I can 'hear' the speaker's voice in ...

Khistopher Alarm bells and yelling. Well that is never ever a good combination. Luckily she hadn't been sleeping so much as 'staying up way later then she should be reading.' ...

*shy wave* Hi. I'm new here, but this sounds like fun and I'd like to be a part of it, if you still need people? Name: Khistopher (KHIStopher, not KHRIStopher) ...

Hey Angela! We have another Angela in the house! :D Oh wow, a published author o_o You're living the dreams of many others here XD A big kid at heart ...

Something I wrote a few years back, cleaned up a bit. I'm not sure where this came from or what, if anything, I plan to do with it. Just curiouse ...

Not much to add; the above poster handled most of the grammer and technical issues. For me? 'Winged brother'? Whoa, wait a minute, winged? Throws me a little; a guy ...

Wow, this is really good. The only things I can think of to say is, honestly, the sentances seemed a little bit choppy to me. It made it sound a ...

Hey everyone, my name is Angela. ^_^ I'm a twenty two year old published author, trying to move up in the publishing world even further! But I'm always open to ...