seshat77

I think the full critique was covered, but I just wanted to say that you are a beautiful writer, I REALLY love this story. If you can, PM me when ...

Aww! That was such a beautiful story, and it was really cute too! I really liked Calix and Chad's characters, they were very real, you don't see s a lot ...

You're really a beatiful writer, i really liked the first paragraph. i would critique, but I'm busy right now and I just had to tell you that your writing is ...

Thanks sooooo much!!!!!! Sorry about the confusion at first i wanted general, but then i realized that I phrased it wrong and I guess i sort of changed my mind ...

Thanks for the suggestions! I really need them :) P.S. Don't be afraid to be nitpicky, which I'm sure your not, but if you want to give any type of ...

Yeah, sorry, but she was hit by a car at that intersection and there is a memorial for her there. I sort of got the idea from a bus stop ...

ooops, sorry about that, I italicized it in the word doc, but forgot to do it over when I pasted it over here, sorry for the confusion, and thanks for ...

I will try, but besides getting up the courage (which isn't such a big feat, i have done it before), I do not have a lot of time and my ...

Sorry, I didn't want to post too much, 1) because I haven't edited. I personally hate when people put up pre spell-checked work. 2) I only wanted to know if ...