seshat77

Thanks! You sound really cool too, I read some of your stuff, it's awesome!

This is the first thing I saw when i signed up for YWS, I have been here a while, but I didn't really fancy writing pompously about myself, I'm not ...

It is beautiful! I love the rainbow! The light and the falls themselves are sooo pretty. Absolutely lovely! There really isn't much else to say except that I really like ...

The mere fact that we have "taboo" phrases and words in writing defeats the purpose of writing. I disagree with all of the above. As long as any of these ...

You're really a beatiful writer, i really liked the first paragraph. i would critique, but I'm busy right now and I just had to tell you that your writing is ...

Thanks sooooo much!!!!!! Sorry about the confusion at first i wanted general, but then i realized that I phrased it wrong and I guess i sort of changed my mind ...

Thanks for the suggestions! I really need them :) P.S. Don't be afraid to be nitpicky, which I'm sure your not, but if you want to give any type of ...

Yeah, sorry, but she was hit by a car at that intersection and there is a memorial for her there. I sort of got the idea from a bus stop ...

There are tons of spelling mistakes, but those are the simple parts to fix, it doesn't change the fact that you have a beautiful way of writing. It's really hard ...

ooops, sorry about that, I italicized it in the word doc, but forgot to do it over when I pasted it over here, sorry for the confusion, and thanks for ...

Mommy's Bus A small boy with shaggy, combed brown hair sat shivering on a cold, wet bench. He wore a brown jacket, a pink tie that reached his knees, the ...

I realize that being very critical of your own work is a crucial part of being a good writer, is doubting the fact that you should keep writing a good ...

I know that writing prompts are easy to find (google it), but I wanted to know if anyone has one that they enjoyed, or one that helped them, or maybe ...

I will try, but besides getting up the courage (which isn't such a big feat, i have done it before), I do not have a lot of time and my ...

Sorry, I didn't want to post too much, 1) because I haven't edited. I personally hate when people put up pre spell-checked work. 2) I only wanted to know if ...