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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural
    Re: Branded and Scarred (Chapter One)

    Well I must say you now have me intrigued :) I shall like to follow this story if you don't mind. I really like the characters so far and the ...

    Mar 22, 2012

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: The Storm Comes

    You didn't mention you had this poem up here!!!! Wow!!! So brilliant, vivid....descriptive....I feel like I'm there!!! O please let it rain soon!!!! Thank you for this delightful piece :)

    Jul 23, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: The Unwritten

    Ooooooo I haven't read a story about other worlds since the pendragon series!!! This could be a new favorite of mine!!! Your characters are good so far, I'm looking forward ...

    Jul 21, 2011

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: [Post Deleted]

    This was an amazing story :) I loved how Jesus was portrayed, with lot's of energy but so kind and loving :) My favorite line in the whole story was ...

    Jul 19, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: Red Stilettos(Title Pending) Chapter 2- Waiting

    Okay, I liked definately kept my attention :) You have a good piece here, I just have a few nitpicks... A pair of red stilettos came into the doorway of ...

    Jul 5, 2011

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: Dream do come true.

    Liked story, very cute :) You did a very good job with the descriptions! I could see it very vividly. The end might have been a teensy bit rushed but...that's ...

    Jul 4, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: That Unknown Feeling Chapter 2

    pretty good story so far...Just a few things to point out...one when the 'body' is talking why not make it the consious talking instead? And when you mentioned that the ...

    Jun 26, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: Broken Road Chapter 2

    Okay....awesome!!! I was waiting for this to come out...I like the physical attraction here, very alluring...but real romance starts in a friendship...That's just my opinion anyways...anywho...I like

    Jun 21, 2011

  • Article / Essay » General, General
    Re: The Trichotomy of Me

    Okay, pretty awesome I would have to say. Many people feel that they have different personalities inside of them. Myself included....I think I share two of the hree with you ...

    Jun 20, 2011

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Changes

    liked it, it was very was deep and honest...the voice was young like a teenager. I have a few things to point out. Like maybe she over reacted just a ...

    Jun 20, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: Good-bye Chapter 5 (End)

    *Has read whole story* I really like this...though I wish you would have explained how Hayden and Annie broke up :/ besides that it was a very good story. I'm ...

    Jun 7, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Night Creatures, Chapter 3.

    Okay...two things that I happened to catch " Carity shook Shanelle awake then wondered Wandered away relying on her to wake up Brendan to too ." then there was a ...

    Jun 7, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Tears of Autumn, Ch 1

    Okay so first of all I'd like to say I enjoyed the story and it was very well written. You have a natural writer's tongue which is a very satisfying ...

    Jun 5, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: Junior Year. A Sequel.

    I read the whole story of falling sun...from when you first posted it to this latest one...I must say I am very much impressed. I honestly think you could have ...

    Jun 2, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 1 (Draft #2)

    Here I am ready to review! First of all,I liked the story, and it definitely has potential to be a best-seller romance novel! Now onto the boring stuff (a.k.a. grammar ...

    Jul 7, 2010


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