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As for the cell detail, I'm considering doing that while they're talking. And the layout when it goes over to Azul, saying that he tossed a glance towards the left ...

Thank you so much =D And I was a bit rushed so spelling wasn't great. Ummmm yeah I was considering changing the head thing but wanted to show their despiration(?) ...

I like the idea and I'm sure its great. All I'd say like EVERYONE ELSE is watch grammer, and maybe repeating a word too often. Rather is used alot in ...

Like everyone else there are a few errors in your writing. I really do like the back ground though, and the fact he's about to get hit by a truck ...

Ok, so this is really only the second time that I've sat down and wrote. Its honestly not that good but I was told I should put it up for ...

Ummm hi anyone reading this, my brother used to use this site a while back and said it'd be good for me. I'm honestly not very good at writing at ...