seeminglymeaningless

Hey NinjaCookieMonster, thank you for the review. some barely of age I knew it sounded repetitive, but I couldn't think of a way to fix it. Realizing that he had ...

I felt that bringing back an old word was appropriate in this situation as it shortens the sentence it is part of. I would otherwise have had to write "However, ...

lol you're in luck considering I watched the first Lord of the Rings last night. It was incredibly boring, and the CGI was terrible compared to today's standard, but it ...

I understand that you are new to this site, Tianna, but it's not hard to Edit Your Post to delete the poem yourself. I've also noticed that you haven't made ...

I agree with Snoik, much much better. I think perhaps you should mention that the zombie turning didn't happen until, like, an hour prior to 3pm, so that it would ...

I think, mandapanda, the problem everyone else seems to have is that because you've posted this in the short story category, it means that your story starts and finishes with ...

I didn't review Elinor's review, otherwise I would have been looking at her use of syntax, grammar and lexicon etc. Instead, I was suggesting to mandapanda that she doesn't have ...

Hey Roon, awesome review! I'm sorry I haven't been online lately. . . been busy with uni; exams etc. Aaanyway. Here's the next part if you're still keen on reading. ...

lol the whole Aiisha and Robert thing wasn't my idea. In fact, I really got angry and annoyed with it. The argument made things very uneasy at home :P I ...

Roon, "until the sun was far down." Shall add something about a horizon - not my writing :P Quote: The day had went more painfully for Aiisha The whole orc ...

Rohan :) Haven't seen you on MSN much either. How's life been treating you? And yeah, it's a bit long, so there was no need to even read it :P ...

Roon, once again, thanks for your critique :P Trenchcoat is two words, but it's fantasy :P Roll with it. "Kahlak'tisht whistled to himself and averted his eyes, but the act ...

Roon, you didn't need to reply so quickly, but I am rather pleased you did. I love defending myself :P The whole "cutting my (yes, losses, not loses) losses you ...

Roon, every critique is a worthy critique. You certainly didn't waste any time - you picked up on some things I might have missed otherwise. On the origins of "seedy" ...