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Hey Emilie, I would suggest hiding your author's note in a spoiler, especially when you have mistakes within it. First: I can immediately see that you don't have enough paragraphs. ...

Entering this chapter having never read the previous ones, I have to admit that this is some really good writing and that this piece shouldn't have been in the "Recent ...

Hi :) First off, you should put your author's note in a spoiler so that we know when your actual piece begins and so that your note does not detract ...

Hey Nep :) I'm Jai, one of the four Musketeers, at your service! First thing: I loved this script. It's so well laid out and you look like you really ...

Hi Girl :) I'm Jai, one of the Four Musketeers, here upon your request at our WRFF thread. On to the review. Prologue. Once upon a time there was a ...

Hey UltraViolet :) Jai here, one of the Four Musketeers who will be reviewing your work, as requested. You received a whole heap of fantastic reviews already, and I didn't ...

Hey Skins, Jai here, reviewing on behalf of 1/4th of the Four Musketeers :) On to the review. “Whoa! Frickin’ hell, Tori. You sure as hell know how to scare ...

One of the Four Musketeers, Jai here. I’d always hated hospitals. The bland colours, the hushed voices, the hard, plastic waiting room chairs and the people with blank faces. What ...

Jai here, one of the Four Musketeers, reviewing as requested. I stared in front of me, unsure of what to do. Oliver and I were standing side by side as ...

Hiya, Jai here, one of the Four Musketeers. First, why/when did Oliver leave his phone at Victoria's place? “Your stop, love.” The ruff sound of the bus driver's voice grumbled ...

I think Light_Devil mentioned this earlier, but you're probably getting sick of seeing, "Jai, one of the Four Musketeers here, reviewing upon request", but it's necessary to draw other people ...

Jai here, one of the Four Musketeers, here to continue reviewing your novel. Yay! Victoria gets what she deserves. This was the best written chapter so far, not only because ...

Wow, what a deep story. You did a tremendous job managing to write about a doctor living under the sea and forgetting names. Many people would have taken the easy ...

Jai here, continuing to review your novel as one of the Four Musketeers. First, your spoiler: Victoria Kingston must be married by the time she's eighteen. At the moment, she's ...

Jai here, one of the Four Musketeers, continuing to review your novel, as requested. I think you should put your author's notes at the end, or in a spoiler, as ...