seana

This was very good, please write some more.

thank you, i know you don't mean to be rude, i appreciate the constructive criticism and i will improve it for the next post. :)

love is like medicine makes you feel better or worse, in some case's love, is more of a curse, you trapped inside your own perfect hell, no escape form the ...

this is quite good...if there was one bad thing it would be that is draged a weeny bit... but this great keep it up :D :elephant:

to get it published would be a dream come true...but there's lots of better writers out there... x :) (yah im speaking of those ppl on hear)

lol whaa steady on cow gurlll. i wont get it published...but i will fetch the first few chapters with me tomorow hehe :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: x

THANK YOU XXX yah i know. i need to improve on the spelling...and of course it left un anwcerd questions... its to get u to read the whole thing xoxo

I stood there, knowing I should leave. But I couldn't, I wanted to; with all the passion in my body I wanted to leave and never come back. However every ...