seana

Truth is, life in its self is like one big o'll story. With its unexpected twists and turns it keeps you carrying on. Waiting; forever-waiting for the big climax to ...

Hey! Ive put my story to a 16+ sorry for any inconveniences this has caused, now-for the story! :P Trudging miserably up the steps I saw our household maid doing ...

Thanks. :)

This is an over all good poem, but I feel it has a lack of emotion. Try to reach out more with the vocab too :) Hope this little bit ...

Hey guy! After a over all good out come with a taster, I decided to go ahead and write the full length story. Hear it go's comments are welcome!!! I ...

The story seems all about the talking, It doesnt give me any idea what the situation is. You need to add detail in, otherwise people arent going to want to ...

Ok, this is great for a draft. The only thing thats wrong with It is the fact that you dont really set a background, you do however make the reader ...

hey newbie! Its really good on hear! Im fairly new hear too, have you thought about writing a sonnet/poem then going back to an unfinished piece of work and finishing ...

She is a pretty messed up girl, and yes, In parts of the story she takes drugs x

Thanks guys! I did happen to want It to be a clique love poem, so I gave the right Impression. Thanks for taking to time to review for me. ^^

this is just part one guys, whether I carry on with it or not depends on what ya'll think. Im sucky at spelling so if you could take that into ...

this is sooo funny. seriously. i hate spoof's but even i laughed at this. good job!

i thought this was good. it was a nice speed. it had a story bihind it too. i would change the part 'Her very bestfriend Mary, no one understood, no ...

please, please, please, write some more! you rock at it. i think it covered all aspects of been gay as well. it was emotional as well as a great read.

this is really good. i totally get what you're saying. :)