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Hey people, ummm yeah im a rubish speller, im using an older web connection so i couldnt get spell cheker on. Also im guessing most of you guys are American? ...

Hey people, ummm yeah im a rubish speller, im using an older web connection so i couldnt get spell cheker on. Also im guessing most of you guys are American? ...

Short story, enjoy! "Large latte, please." I said in a timmid voice to the guy stood serving coffe. He looked down at me and I saw a slight smile pull ...

First off, this is a really emotional story. however it also comes across as a poem. (but...maybe its just me) im not going to go through all the basic grammers ...

OK, maybe I missed the plot; I didnt see the whole basis of the story. This is written good, but maybe try adding more detail and more of a plot ...

I loved this, very different from my usual taste in story's, I think it was because you could just Imagen your self in their shoes, sorry I would review; though ...

@tenyo. yes its ment to be among the funny side. :p

ok ok right i know im only 14 but i was reallllyyy bored aha, i dunno why i wrote it but i swear i rated it as an 16? aha, ...

This is such a cute story! good job, yeah please do another, when their older and see if they've change or are the same!

Okay first off, im not gonna rip the story to shreds, just be sure to check your grammar before posting. This was something horrible that happened, and i can see ...

This is very realistic, you can feel the heart brake radiating from the characters. Make sure your keep your grammar in check and try not to switch tenses. Keep up ...

A very beautiful touching poem, keep at it, you got talent dude!

I have no idea how to delete it so...I just erased all the text :)

FUDDDGGGING AMAZING :D I LOVED IT.

OK, first off, I think you could use a little more work on your paragraphs. Also maybe use a wider range of adjectives as I noticed you used the words ...