scurley7

So they go brown when you cook them. Where does wind come from?

Wow. I have to say this is one of the best things I've read on this site. I loved it. I’m scared what it would look like all the blood. ...

Yeah same as above, your format is a tad strange. Ummm... I have to admit I didn't really like this poem but maybe it's just me. It's very clichéd. Maybe ...

Hey really, really good work. I actually enjoyed reading this piece and it literally left me wanting to find out what happens to dear Paige. I've just got a few ...

Hey. Nice work. I really enjoyed reading this though there are a few things I'd like to point out and ask you about. What tone were you going for when ...

ily tim

Hey. Thanks to both of you guys for reading my work. In response to GryphonFledgling's questions I give these: The coats are experimenting on the limits of the human mind; ...

Vader

Revenge story I wrote a while back. It's a bit graphic towards the end. Stitches Muttering to myself, twitching and jerking with every tiny movement, I rose from the cold ...