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Thank you so much! Wow... :)

thanks Lylas :)

HI Alvarin! This is a very interesting piece to read, and I really appreciate the cool narrator you have. I wrote a short story where the narrator was a novel, ...

Thank you so much for the review niteowl :)

Thank you for the review Elo :) Cello > Violin, but thank you for the feedback anyway :)

Great! Thanks so much!

thanks :)

Thank you Baroness! I had a really hard time picking the second word though, and I think it showed in the awkwardness of "everything". I was originally going to go ...

That was really helpful -- thank you so much :)

Wow, thank you times ten :)

thanks so much!

Thank you so much methrirr123!

Thank you so much Joyce Sparrows! I'm very new to the Young Writers Society and I really appreciate your critique. Believe me in saying that you're definitely not the first ...