scotty.knows

Hey, this is interesting! Good job. I'm all puzzled over who the tipsy friend from chapter 7 is. The mystery is on! Fortunately, it won't be long to find out ...

Wow, it doesn't sound like there is anyone who identifies their selves as a "typical Christian" on this thread. I didn't say that I thought heaven would be boring. Did ...

Yeah, I know where all the keys are too. That's the way it's supposed to work. What are your guys' WPM's?

Aww, the little mousey-wousey is so Keeyooote!

8/10. Eight only because you didn't invent the totally amazing MC.

Banned for breaking up the flow two users had banning each other.

Your mother eats gym shorts. (The obligatory remark for when someone is confused but someone else is entirely secure in their insanity.)

Aww... that's creepy.

LOL! Okay, I get Arya's. There was a mean little boy running around nabbing chickens with his colander on a stick. This made a Green Peace fellow very mad. So ...

9/10. Oooooh, pretty-colored spider

This is definitely something worth extending. It did start a little slow, but it definitely picked up after several paragraphs. I also agree that it would make an excellent prologue. ...

7/10 it looks artsy. What album is it from?

Oboy! Another installment in the "about a revolution" series. As far as titles go, how about, "The Liberation of Cambria" or "Night is Falling" or "A Time of War" or ...

It's windy in Spokane; and snow showers in Sandpoint. I should know. Whoa... say "Snow showers in Sandpoint" five times fast. Tricky.

Hey, this is good. I can't ever recall assassin-driven sequences 13-year old girls , but this was good. It was kind of Tomb Raider/Aeon Flux/Blood Rayne-ish. Not bad, not bad ...