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Re: Gage Jackson
His face was streaked with blood, crimson and dry on his cheek. His jaw was flecked with freckles, his green eyes sparkled with exhilaration. He bit his bottom lip, tasting ...
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: Sunburnt thirst
Are you Stephanie Meyer? Lol, gold eyes, gorgeous family? I got bored after she said blonde hair works. This is really all dialouge. More discription would make this piece better ...
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: Sunburnt thirst
Are you Stephanie Meyer? Lol, gold eyes, gorgeous family? I got bored after she said blonde hair works.
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: What The Stars See - Chapter Three - Dash's Lullaby
Dash’s Lullaby I only woke because the yacht stopped moving, the waves no longer crashed against the sides and the ocean beneath me was still, calm even. Arden was flicking ...
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: What The Stars See - Prolouge, Chapter One and Two
Okay, people have said that the chapter names confuse them. Through the whole thing it is Poppy's point of view. No one elses. The bold names (Olev and Arden) are ...
Nov 18, 2008 -
Re: Passchendaele
29th Of May 1915 The waves, their tips white with foam, crashed up against the boat. Oliver and Ethan rocked, back and forth until their stomachs lurched and they stumbled ...
Aug 17, 2008 -
Re: Something Odd
The sun always shone through the curtain in his room. He had tried everything to block it out, and he’d finally accepted that it never really leaves. Now, every morning, ...
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: Sea Foam Green.
Thank you :D
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: Sea Foam Green.
I wanted to scream, mainly because he was hurting me. All the lies I forced myself believe suddenly become so real. They pushed into my chest, I could feel my ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: Peyton Lysander
When We Were Six; Peyton watched the clouds fly over the pale blue sky. I wasn’t sure if he liked them, he seem to frown when they stopped moving. His ...
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: Under Their Wings; Chapter Three
While The Clouds Were Howling “Sometimes glass glitters more than diamonds because it has more to prove” Terry Pratchett The air was humid, it stunk with combat and was held ...
Mar 3, 2008 -
Re: 11 Years Old
Very nice. In places in flowed in others it didn't, i'd work on that. And I would make it long. But very nice emotion.
Mar 3, 2008 -
Re: Under Their Wings; Chapter Two
Thanks ReasonIsTreason! I'll be sure to post the next chapters after I write them!
Mar 1, 2008 -
Re: Under Their Wings; Chapter Two
Thank you :)
Mar 1, 2008 -
Re: ♥ Art Boy
Beautiful Story.
Feb 29, 2008
