sarebear

Hey there, First of all, I loved this. You've taken a used topic and made something new and beautiful, very moving. Your simple style of writing is very stream-of-consciousness without ...

Been there done that. I bought it on my trusty-dusty kindle (which makes the illustrations a bit disappointing) but oh well.

Hey Rosey, First of all, I love the way you open the story. That first sentence is just vague enough to be intriguing, detailed enough to show the reader what ...

My brain is running like a sugar high times ten plus an espresso, the seatbelt too tight around my hamburger-and-fries-stretch stomach. My hyperactive consciousness ricochets off the soft cranial fold

Hey there, First of all, nice job. I was impressed by how well you stuck with this and followed it all the way through to the end, so kudos. I'm ...

Sitting on a dock together, throwing pebbles in the water, I watch the ripples spread. Wond'ring who I want to be to make the change I want to see but ...

Verse 1: I never thought I'd be materialistic but all that's left of you is things. How many times have I looked down at your picture, needing the comfort that ...

This is a work in progress, so any reviews are greatly appreciated! As you can see, the front cover is on the right, the spine in the middle, and the ...

I am totoally in there with smylin!!!!!!! As my friend said when I showed it to her, this is "epic to epic proportions"! I have no nitpicks. I have nothing ...

Hey plastic! Wow you're old. I've never met anyone who was 99 before. Anyways, this is a very nice poem! It is short, sweet, and to the point. One thing ...

Hey there, I really liked this! A clever and pretty original concept! I actually don't have any grammatical errors-this was very good, few if any typos. Your prose is pretty ...

Hey Karzkin, I like this a lot! Very nice job! Especially powerful is your very last line--stunning and a perfect closing to a great poem! There is one thing here ...

Hi there, This is extremely well done! You really seem to have a grasp of poetry, rhyme, and meter. Good job! One thing I would suggest is for you to ...

Hi there, This is very beautiful. The title captivated me immediately! I have a few corrections: Not happy anymore, dont want anything, go way. Don't should be apostrophized (just made ...

I'd just like to clarify. Ear tags are not the things that are on everyone's ears. My friend has these little nubs of skin--a birth defect, that are on her ...