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Hiya Smylin, I would love a review on this: Also, if you want me to review something in turn, let me know. Thanks! Sare

Premeditation contemplation from inside soundproof walls is safe. nobody can enter here. no video camera hidden inside the soft folds of cranial tissue no two-way mirrors or leaky key holes ...

This story is fictional, but loosely based on a past experience. There is a scar on the bluish white skin of my chest, just above my heart, that is dedicated ...

Hello Shiney, First of all, I'm extremely impressed by your skill at acrostics. The poem flows normally, I wouldn't know it was an acrostic if you hadn't said so and ...

Well hello shybluishflower (by the way, I love your username). This is a very nice little poem. I especially love your second stanza, the first two lines. Very lovely. First ...

Hiya, This is very beautiful. It's thick to read--I found myself reading much slower than usual--sort of like swimming through heavy cream....I like it. I especially liked your ending. There ...

This is my second stab at designing a book cover, for Awesomesocks' contest. winged1.PNG

If only the candles were real. The quilt lies unfinished. Every week for the past year she has sewed a completed patch onto it. Every day she has sat by ...

Hey there, Korens, Welcome to YWS! I'm sarebear, an enigmatic, overenthusiastic, slightly spastic (that just rhymes, by the way) YWSer. If you have any questions, need help, etc, please feel ...

Hey Kayla Kitty, Welcome to YWS! It's a great little (or really big) family here... I'm sarebear...currently a part of the mentoring program, which you can check out at the ...

NOT ACCEPTING/ RETIRED Hiya, Here I am with a profile! name: Sarebear or Sarah age: 14 what you write: Poetry, fiction, the occasional song what you review: Mostly poetry and ...

Hey Rock, I'm just loving your novel here. I've never followed one through before...but I think I'd like to. First, as usual, I have some nitpicks. I don’t even remember ...

My village is gone. My family is gone. And soon I may die. So I continue to tell myself, although the harsh reality has yet to set in with the ...

Hey there, I'm not entirely sure how to review this as I imagine you don't really care about spelling or grammar, but I can give you my impressions.... I like ...

Hey there, First of all, I really liked your opening sentence. I thought you were beginning with the classic "character is bleeding and near death" intro but I liked how ...