sarebear

Well hello there...nice poem! Firstly, I have some nitpicks (as always). My Sweet Love, please be by my side. Let the fears of this fragile heart subside. "Side and "subside" ...

Paulie (Hermes) There were tears on my cheeks. He didn't turn his face to me, kept it down. He might have been staring at his shoelaces, if he could have ...

Hiya Talia, This is a lovely little nugget of poem. I like it a lot!I don't think it needs more...I like the bluntness. I also found the "game of cat ...

Paulie (Hermes) His story made me hurt inside for him. I had thought that I had it bad, with a mother who didn't approve of my choice of partner. But ...

Paulie (Hermes) He asked me to tell me about myself, and somehow a dam in me just broke and I was telling him everything without worrying. I hadn't talked this ...

Paulie (Hermes) Timothy seemed a bit off once we met Emi. He asked me to guide him back to the Hades cabin, so I took his hand in mine. It ...

First of all, I just realized that Paulie's constant griping about not having siblings is unfounded since Emi is a daughter of Mercury (I don't know my Roman gods, and ...

Paulie (Hermes) He sounded so sad when he talked about not seeing--and how people treated him. I hoped he didn't think that I was trying to baby him. I wanted ...

Paulie (Hermes) "Can you tell me...what's it like to be able to see?" I mulled that one over. "Sometimes it's wonderful...sometimes it's the most painful of all the senses," I ...

Paulie (Hermes) He sort of lapsed into silence after that. Not much of the talker, but I knew how that was. It wasn't uncomfortable, so I just leaned against a ...

Paulie (Hermes) Once the paintball battle was over I decided that it was safe to show my face again. The woods had always drawn me in and now I took ...

I sink down in my seat so far that my chin is nearly level with the desk and stare at the off-white tiles flecked with color, the kind that are ...

Paulie (Hermes) It was really sweet seeing Meg meet her brother, even if it was Avalon, who's a bit strange. She seemed so happy to find herself in a place ...

Sorry about the spacing! I had trouble with it. Also, the songs are supposed to be completely in italics but I can't get it to work with me for some ...

Paulie (Hermes) It took me a while to extract myself from Alken's company, who I barely knew and didn't particularly like seeing as he couldn't even call me by my ...