sarebear

Hey Skins, I wrote another poem! (because I know how much you like poetry) and wondered if you wanted to review it! Here's the link if you're interested. It's called ...

I enjoyed this a lot. It is somewhat cliched, but what isn't. I like the idea of losing a fight instead of winning one. That's nice and fresh. I'm a ...

Just so you know, this is an overreaction to a tough day at school. I am not goth, I do not want to hurt people. This my feelings poured into ...

Wow! THAT"S SO FRIKIN GOOD!!!!! Uh, how exactly did you get so good at art? Like seriously amazing? Okay, I realize this isn't much of a review, but how do ...

Ky: I like it a lot. I was wondering if you'd think about writing a non-rhyming version. Just for comparison. I like it as is, but I was just thinking ...

Hi I agree with the other two about use of the word 'ain't.' sometimes they’ll have steam coming out of them or something I'm not big on the line 'or ...

Hi ultraviolet, Wow, is all I can say. These are kind of funny. A few things: I might rework: "now my leg you are pullin'" Pullin' doesn't really rhyme with ...

A red plumed bird sits on the branch of a young birch tree. It is winter and the tree is simple, unadorned with leaves. She is slender and silver. Her ...

Esther: I love this! It sounds a lot like shel silverstein! I love the poem, it would make a great picture book. 1 thing: get rid of crud. It's just ...

Goodness! This is really really really really good! I love it! LOVE IT!!!! It is so abstract, but the words flow together. I love the feeling. It made me feel ...

This is a poem, a reflection, that I wrote in fifth grade and have done a lot to since then. Enjoy! To Lou, my little redhead friend from far across ...

Hi WW Sarebear here, thanks for reviewing my stuff, here's a review for you as requested! First of all, nitpicks: JoJo looked over at the table of the "Populars". if ...

Hi Skins, It seems like you are the perfect person to ask. I have a poem called Nine Eleven which is dramatic poetry. Here is the link: I am also ...

Hi! I'm Sarebear and I'm pretty new here. I'm writing this story called For The Love of God. Here's the link if you are interested: If you prefer poetry, here's ...

'untalented' writer: Okay, first of all this is a really good start. I like the ideas. I also really like the way you phrase things. There are a few technical ...