sarebear

Hi, Actually I quite like this. The opening caught my attention and was very powerful. My mind is a blistered crusade, vengeful to the words you speak and the tones ...

Hi bm, Well, for a first poem, this is very good! Your sense of flow and stream-of-consciousness is excellent. I have a few comments to improve the way the poem ...

Beautiful--sorry if this is a terrible review, but really touching and lovely!!!!!!

Hi, To be honest, this sounds professional! I'm very impressed. I particularly enjoyed your use of colors throughout the poem to convey the mood. No, I didn't find it repetitive. ...

Hi! Well, this was a fun read! I really loved the last stanza. I guess I liked both of your poems. The first one is more serious and very beautiful, ...

I definitely enjoyed this. I especially liked the beginning: Her death began with a touch, A push, A shove, An uncaring caress. Or perhaps a little before? With a racing ...

We read the house on Mango Street in school and wrote our own "vignettes". This one is inspired by the chapter "Sire." Enjoy! Vivian dances like an angel. Gleaming point ...

thanks flyers. like your poem

Okay, so this is my first time ever attempting to use adobe illustrator. I know that her feet and hands are kind of weird, so no need to comment on ...

It all started when I was born. My mother was a leaena or lioness of great power and with a noble blood line, tracing back to Lionid Amplusaum, great king ...

Chorus I’d do anything to see your smile again to sit and hold your hand and talk a while again, I’d do anything to see your smile… (To see your ...

Jaycee was sitting on a pillow of air, a good four inches above the ground. She clicked her fingers and a warm wind swirled around her, blowing her long hair ...

2152 A.D. “Granny’s here! Granny’s here!” shouts one of the children, pointing to the monitor with glee. The cry is taken up by the other two. Their parents come swiftly ...

Okay, so this is the third installment. I would suggest reading the first two chapters if you haven't already! Chapter 3 I woke the next morning to Beth gently shaking ...

Hola, Okay, so individual things first. Bastet First of all, Bastet's proportions are kind of off. She doesn't have a right hand, and her lower body is short and feet-less. ...