sarebear

Hey Kitty, This is the first chapter of a novel I'm working on and was hoping you might look over it for me! Here's the link, thanks a ton in ...

Hi Rascalover, I'm here for a review! This is the first chapter of a romance novel I was working on and would love some help! Here's the link: Thanks! Sarebear

Mom says, A hundred-and-one-point-two! Today, I think, no school for you. Yes ! No school! No dumb Français ! Just stay at home and nap all day! Dad bikes to ...

I love this! Especially the lines about the sticks and the ears! I disagree with Amflifler--it doesn't really need a deeper meaning and it's one of those poems that expresses ...

Also, I wouldn't usually opt to write in third person present tense but since the majority of the story is in past tense it's really only this chapter and the ...

Hi Isha, I'm here for a review! I wrote this poem for my grandpa who passed away recently and because I want to get it published I need some people ...

Hi this is beautiful! The only thing is that I feel like their could be a story behind it that doesn't get showcased in this poem. You might consider thinking ...

Hi, I think this is a fresh, new portrayal of a comfortably old topic! First for some nitpicks... Sometimes I would delete the comma here inspiration evades me, Hiding like ...

This is spectacular and I have nothing more to add! I've read it through twice now and still am speechless!! Fantastic job! Sarebear

Hi, I composed this poem for my grandfather, who died recently, and I want to publish it so please butcher it for me! Here's the link: Thanks! Sarebear

Hi, I'm here for a review! I wrote this poem in memoriam for my grandpa, which I hope to get published and need as many reviews on as possible! Thanks ...

Hi, Sarebear here for a review Well, I'm a pretty tough reviewer so don't take everything I say to heart (no pun intended). First of all, I feel like this ...

My grandfather died recently (my mom's father) and I wanted to write something for him. My goal eventually is to get this published, I think my mom would like that. ...

This is really cool! I haven't seen anything like it before I don't think!!! The tumor grows now. It breaks off, and wanders. Anywhere on earth, Adaptive radiation occurs, And ...

Very nice job! This is really good realistic drawing, and as someone who aspires to be able to do things like that I'm very impressed. It's also very brave to ...