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Hey Karzkin, First of all I want to say that I've enjoyed reading your poetry the past few days! Now on to the poem: First some nitpicks. Things to change ...

Hi Derek, First of all, I'm somewhat confused. Half or your poem has a rhyme scheme. The other half doesn't. You need to pick one, and go with it. Also, ...

Actually I rather like this. You should submit it!

This is for the contest: "A word is stronger than a thousand pictures" but reviews are still welcome. My word was "Microwave" and I couldn't think of a story premise, ...

I'm afraid I don't have a ton to say about this, except that I really enjoyed reading it. Your prose is simple but elegant, simultaneously painting a picture and playing ...

Very....uh....well....I guess imperceptible might sum it up... This is interesting. Your prose is nice. One technical thing I might have done, because you did it in the rest of the ...

Well, here's my entry (edits are very welcome!) Your story is about a maid in Fairyland folding clothes. One day in summer, Dagmar collected a pile of Orlagh’s garments from ...

Fantastic job! I loved this, and my english teacher asked to see it!

Hi pink! This is the first chapter of a Romantic Fiction book I'm working on (that doesn't really have a title as of yet). I'd love a review for it! ...

I liked this a lot, short and to the point. Although in general it is something of a cliche, as anime said "breaking the lock" isn't a cliche which was ...

Hi! So I'm going to start with my technical nitpicks. First of all, Pharaoh is misspelt in the title and in the piece. Scarab beetles and scorpions coexist along side ...

Hiya there Boo, sare here for a review! Annoying ditties aside, I do have a review for you. I'll show you commitment It's five years with no face I like ...

Hi Lavender, If you decide you're okay with reviewing it, here's the link to the first chapter of my book! Thanks Sare

Just out of curiosity, what mediums did you use for this, and for what parts of the piece did you use them? Sorry if this isn't a real review!

Hi Fizza, Well, not having read Macbeth I have no idea what I'm talking about, but I'm happy to give you help on your prose, so here goes! Fog and ...