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Hi Alabaster, First of all, love your avatar! Obviously you have to be a bit tough when you put your work out into the cyber-world, but I think that you'll ...

I feel like this is somewhat pointed at me. I apologize, Karzkin, for my ignorance. However, you will be happy that I changed the title to "A Collection of Senryus". ...

Hija, First of all, I'd appreciated this because I am a little sister to an older brother as well. My brother isn't that mean, but I've definitely noticed a change ...

Neat! I love the colors and the text! And although I have no idea why it's there, I love the bandaid! Nice work!

Hi Julia, Welcome to YWS! We're a bunch of crazy lunatics after your writing! I'm Sarah and I'm 14 too, so we can be the best of friends! ;) Get ...

Hi Pug! YWS was my first writing forum (and continues to be my only one)! Reviewing is a lot of fun because everyone is totally psyched to hear what you ...

Hi there, Alright, first the nitpicks: Luna woke up in a cold sweat, screaming. This opening is not particularly descriptive. I think the word "screaming" isn't doing much for you. ...

I don't have a whole lot to say except that I really enjoyed this and wanted to let you know that my favorite was the one called "Eye". The contrast ...

Something I got an idea for while putting on eyeliner. Also, because several people have asked, I'd like to clarify. Left Eye is most definitely read by a girl. Right ...

HI Very beautiful writing style. You manage to be vague without being too vague (one of my pet peeves). First, nitpicks: "Sometime TODAY Barry!!!" Another pet peeve is multiple exclamation ...

under construction

Hi! Well, I'm no artist but I'll do my best here. #1: My favorite part of this is the shirt (call me weird) but I like the reflected heart. Skunks ...

Yeah, sorry about the shortness. I guess I forgot to mention that it had to be less than 350 words long.

Hi! Here for a review. I’ve spent the last four years with sand under my tongue Beautiful! In this and the next line I love your use of human anatomy ...

A piece I wrote for a competition in my town (unfortunately it didn't win) but I still kinda like it. It is now being re-purposed as a contest piece for ...