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I wrote this for English class. We had not read the book yet, just looked at the cover, and were supposed to come up with our own version of why ...

Hi Janika, Here for a review! I enjoyed your poem. It's short and to the point, but very lyrical. Nice job! First of all, I have a few nitpicks. Night ...

Ooh...pretty! I love both of these. Actually I especially like the black and white one. Everyone knows that the ocean is blue, but the black and white really emphasizes the ...

Hi there. First of all, I hope this isn't a true story and I'm going to have to assume that it isn't since it's being posted in fiction. However, it ...

First of all, I've read the three chapters, and the first thing would suggest is that you consolidate at least the first two chapters if not all three into one. ...

Hi TC, Welcome to YWS! You know TC reminds me of our school newspaper "The Commons" but I digress...I've been on YWS for a while and have been really enjoying ...

Hey Henrique Welcome to YWS! I'm Sarah and I'm from the US. First of all, I admire you for finishing a book (something I've never done). You could post it ...

Prettiful! I especially like your last one. However, I wasn't sure what the red object is in the foreground of the first one. I would say that that and the ...

Well, looks like we're both new because this is the first storybook I've ever posted in. Someone please tell me if I totally break the rules. So here goes: I'm ...

Hi Rachel! I'm here to prove Rosey right. Welcome to YWS! I love England (as an American who lived there for 6 months). There are lots of folks from all ...

Hey Sheep, Well first of all my absolute favorite is your fourth one. I love all the details, especially her eyes. Actually, you've done a nice job on the eyes ...

Hey Camille, Welcome!!! Actually I think I may have read A Walk to Remember... YWS is a fantastic place where any writer can totally make themselves at home. I'm a ...

Hello, I enjoyed this poem. My grandfather passed away recently (of a stroke, but all the same) so I can identify. It is dark, but I like the way you ...

Sorry but I just have to say how sweet that is Clay. Big brothers should always think about how what they do affects their little sisters--and you seem like a ...

Hi Robbin, Having just posted on your welcome mat post about not being scared of reviews, here I am to prove it to you! Alrighty, into the review. First of ...