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I made this two years ago for English class when we were reading The Wind in the Willows. Enjoy!

This is something I wrote when I was about 8, judging by the handwriting, which I will now edit and post (I spelled "suggest" "sugjust"). No need to take it ...

Hello Angel, and welcome to YWS! Alrighty. First of all, your intro really sucked me in. I loved the first stanza, and was immediately curious for an explanation. I have ...

Ooh, I like this! Very nice! I especially love the opening stanza--it had me totally hooked for what you were going to say next--very beautiful! I also loved the last ...

Hey, I love this--beautiful!! I love the extended metaphor, and your writing style is really beautiful! The one thing that I was somewhat confused about was the way that you ...

Hi there, Nice job on this! I have a few nitpicks for you: Winging its lonely way Onward toward the horizon. Never a permanent denizen, But ever soaring away. This ...

Hi VV, Welcome to YWS! For me, the most helpful page to learn about rules, etc was this: which is by Nate (the founder of the site) and should tell ...

“Polly, dearest, don’t chew at the collar,” cooed the little girl crouched on the cobbles. Her knees were peeling and chapped and she wore a sort of sack draped around ...

Hi there, Here for a review! I liked this start. I think that it could easily be the first chapter of a novel, but as a short story it doesn't ...

Oh karzkin...always on the lookout for "haiku" ;) Anyway, I thought these were nice. I'm not a fan of movie marathons (I'm prone to headaches) but I appreciated these nonetheless. ...

Hey there, Liked your poem! First off I have a few nitpicks: I swoop upward Carving a perfect arc Headed up to heaven Headed to the perfect skies Closing my ...

This is great! I love it! I agree with the others on the resizing thing though. The pink of his nose matches perfectly with the color of the rose and ...

Hi Hamer, This was really beautiful! I loved the first four lines. I also loved the next two lines. And the last two. Basically I loved the whole thing. I ...

Another vignette I wrote for English while studying The House on Mango Street Smile, he says. So I smile big as the sun and the camera flashes and burns my ...

This is a vignette that I wrote for English class when we were studying The House on Mango Street. Enjoy! Daddy is crying. Sparkly tears like glass. But splat not ...