sarebear

This is a contest entry for "Be My Eyes." The feeling of feet squishing through mud is how my pea plants feel rooted into the ground. My pea plants are ...

Someone should send this to Nate. He definitely needs to see this. And I totally relate to the thing about banning us!

Hello there, First of all, I don't really understand Melissa's position in the social hierarchy of school. It's unusual to have a perfect pretty girl who is considered a mean ...

This is really beautiful. Like, really, really beautiful. Like, totally fantastic! I loved it! LOVED IT! There is one typo in it: then waided in to your knees, should be ...

Hey there, Nice work on this. The emotion in it is very evident. If you don't mind terribly, I will pick at your poem, as creativemuse put it. Am I ...

Beautiful! I can totally relate to this having felt exactly that way pretty recently.I'm happy to let this poem be...because although it's vague that leads me to apply it to ...

Hello there, This was very clever--I love the way you tied the end back to the title. I do have nitpicks: I drove the blade into her neck, feeling fresh ...

Actually I take no credit for the drawings :( And you should totally read it.

Hi Jessa, First of all, I want to say that I think it's fantastic the way you deal with issues in your life. Instead of worrying from the perspective of ...

This is very beautiful...if somewhat heartbreaking. I had only a few nitpicks: I call you dad because I'm supposed to but you've never been a father to me. I love ...

Hello there, This is a cool concept, and well done. I have two issues: first of all, I wouldn't have known that it was an obese man until you explained ...

This is beautiful! I love it! Very clever, and not something that I've read before. Kudos! I especially like the second stanza. The whole thing is very beautiful. I love ...

Actually I want to say that I didn't realize when I was reviewing that this was so personal, and I'm really sorry if I offended you or hurt your feelings. ...

We were reading Romeo and Juliet in school. I was bored. romeoandjuliet1.PNG I've uploaded it two different ways so you can view it however is easiest.

Hi there, This is very nice. I love your narrative style! I have a few nitpicks--mostly typos: “It’s for you only,” Alexander said as if that explained everything . “Trust ...