sarah12375

Hey I liked the chapter :) The only thing is, I think you should put more detail into it. Like how she feels, what does it smell like maybe, how ...

Wow.... That was so heart felt.... You could really tell what the character was feeling, for the loss of their loved one. It was so easy to relate to in ...

Hey! I think it was a great topic to work on. The blindness of people and how they run away from their lives when it gets too tough. Well that's ...

Wow....... I loved it. Everything you wrote made me constantly thinking "what's going to happen next?" I love also the way you write, it's easy to read. From the beginning ...