sarah12375

Sorry if there's a lot of mistakes, haven't gone over any of my chapters! 4 I went to gym feeling confused. First Max calls me a bitch, constantly and then ...

Hey I liked the chapter :) The only thing is, I think you should put more detail into it. Like how she feels, what does it smell like maybe, how ...

Wow.... That was so heart felt.... You could really tell what the character was feeling, for the loss of their loved one. It was so easy to relate to in ...

Hey! I think it was a great topic to work on. The blindness of people and how they run away from their lives when it gets too tough. Well that's ...

Wow....... I loved it. Everything you wrote made me constantly thinking "what's going to happen next?" I love also the way you write, it's easy to read. From the beginning ...

3 I woke up to my alarm clock blaring; I shifted over and slammed it off. As I walked toward my attached bathroom, I felt my eyes. They were still ...

Well thank you for the reply!!! I do realize the extra adding and I'm sorry but it'll be like that till about chapter 8, because I've already written 8 chapters......... ...

The Unknown When I was a kid; from the age of 3-7, I believed in magic, psychics, and ghosts, though like everyone else, I grew out of it. Though deep ...

All of you should check out the darkest powers series! It's amazing!!!! :)

I loved the poem and what it represents to me. For me it was describing my inner writer. It was truly wonderful to read. :)

Hey everyone! :) My name is Sarah, though you guys must know by my user name! I LOVE reading and writing..... I'm new. But it looks like a great site!