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Re: Lies and Love...
Um.... I got a little bit to say... That was not what I was expecting. It was just talking and in one part you are talking as the third person ...
Oct 19, 2009 -
Re: Lockdown
That was one of the best stories you have written!!! One problem i think is when you said sorer when her ankles or something hurt doesn't quite sound right. You ...
Oct 15, 2009 -
Re: Twilight : The real story
OH MY GOD THAT WAS REALY FUNNY! I love how twilight is like the EXACT opposite of what you wrote. Loved it loved it and loved it!!!!!! I like how ...
Oct 12, 2009 -
Re: Twilight Falls
hey good job on the story. I'm new to this prograhm and I had a quistion. When you right a story do you just give a sample or can you ...
Oct 12, 2009 -
Re: Little Voice in My Head
That was really good. I like how you started withe something so random and you're building it into something so large. But I think the expaining on how he can ...
Oct 10, 2009