sanju

Enjoyed reading the poem so much. The unique quality of the poem lies in its uniqueness. The concept of good and bad, the devil and the God are very well ...

Hi eviehoward Thanks for complimenting my poem. Truly love your kind words.

Thanks Empress for loving my poem. Yes, I would also like to add more pronunciations in between those two lines and was groping unsuccesssfully for them while writing. I work ...

Thanks a lot WW, especially for enlightening me the way to reorient the line to heighten the flow and smoothness; something, I must confess, I am yet to come to ...

Exquisite. Exotic description. You have indeed captured the emotional longing of the man in powerful way. May be you could have given some direction to his agony in some form ...