sammay

I woke up but kept my eyes closed. Something was poking my arms. A thin blanket covered my body. I was wearing a nightgown. A nightgown! My eyes flew open. ...

There's not supposed to be a lot of details. I'm hinting on the characters as I go along.

I really enjoyed your story. I didn't notice any errors so that's good. Keep going I like it! :)

I really liked it but you NEED to work on your spelling. This isn't Face book, write out you and the word and. You also need to work on your ...

Sorry it's so short the second chapter will be longer.

"Helga!" I screamed. "Look, Selena, we can get it ourselves." My friend, Anna said. Typical Anna. We were lying out by the pool on comfy lawn chairs. Anna stood up ...

I like this it's good.

I liked it alot. it was good.

sorry i do not know why it did that.

sorry i don't know why it did that

i really liked tht please write more :) :)

i really liked tht please write more :) :)

i really liked tht please write more :) :)

i really liked tht plz write more :) :)