samkc423

Colors of Me I wake silver in the morning light shining like the moon. Turning yellow in a sunny day warming with the sky. Gray standing in the shadows that ...

I absolutely love where your story is going :D The only problem that I can find is the word "chocking" it is written like that twice in the second part ...

I honestly like your story up to the very end. It gets a bit confusing there and the nursery scene is kind of abrupt. Along with some minor editing (that ...