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~ vanity here with a review! I enjoyed the short, endearing piece - although the poem could use with a little more rhythm to it, since its natural flow and ...

~ vanity here with a review! first of all, the mood you've set from the get-go: I'm already enamored. I miss the softness of your cheeks Our secret smiles among ...

Hello~ here's my review! This elicited a wonderful essence of positivity

This was a fun, compelling read! life, to me, is but one hell of a movie, quite hard in the making, with casts and ques and scenes to be curated, ...

An amusing introductory piece to the narrative. I know the context is just being outlined, but I can already tell the beginnings of a character-driven voice, and am very much ...

Hello!~ Here's my review! Ok, so first off, I like the simplicity and blunt, concise composition of your prose. A few pointers~ Your mention of the lines: "Everything hurts," with ...

An interesting start to the story. I think the main feedback I have for your piece is to use more subtext and less direct, straightforward language. The main character's indifferent ...