Poetry » Teen Fiction, Teen Fiction
Re: Flower Queen
~ vanity here with a review! I enjoyed the short, endearing piece - although the poem could use with a little more rhythm to it, since its natural flow and ...
Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
Re: Hidden Holding Hands
~ vanity here with a review! first of all, the mood you've set from the get-go: I'm already enamored. I miss the softness of your cheeks Our secret smiles among ...
Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
Re: Love Yourself: A Poem
Hello~ here's my review! This elicited a wonderful essence of positivity
Poetry » General, Realistic
Re: a series of unfortunate events.
This was a fun, compelling read! life, to me, is but one hell of a movie, quite hard in the making, with casts and ques and scenes to be curated, ...
Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Action / Adventure
Re: Mala Suerte: a Love Story Within a Prison
An amusing introductory piece to the narrative. I know the context is just being outlined, but I can already tell the beginnings of a character-driven voice, and am very much ...
Poetry » Health, Literature
Hello!~ Here's my review! Ok, so first off, I like the simplicity and blunt, concise composition of your prose. A few pointers~ Your mention of the lines: "Everything hurts," with ...
Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Science Fiction
Re: Mind Changers City Rebellion
An interesting start to the story. I think the main feedback I have for your piece is to use more subtext and less direct, straightforward language. The main character's indifferent ...