saily.kiwalkar

Hi! I seriously wish i had that kind of attitude. The way you have expressed your mindset is really superb! The 'go-getter' kind of attitude is well-shown in this piece. ...

Hi!!! This piece is really cute. It seems you definitely have a rocking group of friends! Just one question. I didn't really get the meaning of the word 'plane' you ...

Hi! Nice story. I agree the comment above. You have used 'patients' instead of 'patience'. I think that for the brother, the correct adjective would be 'spoilt' and not 'spoiled' ...

Hi! I liked this piece. It definitely looks interesting. I'm looking forward for the other chapters. I was so engrossed in reading that i couldn't pick up minor mistakes. Nice ...

Hi! I liked your poem. I could definitely get whatever you were trying to express through the poem. I find it a 'straight-from-the-heart' kind of poem and so I don't ...

Hi! This is real an awesome poem. The emotion of love and its soothing effect is really beautifully put in by you. Keep writing. I especially liked the last stanza. ...

My fairy-tale I knew you had called me to the park… I knew you wanted to talk to me about ‘her’ I felt my pace slow down in the dark, ...

Hi! I am Saily. I liked your poem. It has simplicity. You can definitely add more lines. It seems short to me. I liked the emotion being really sensitive... Try ...

Hi!!! I found this very beautiful. I don't have a clue about melody and stuff but the words are well put in! Keep writing!

Hey! Nice poem. i thought it was really harsh but heartfelt. Keep writing!

hi, welcome to YWS! nice story. i thought it was a bit long but the story is good. keep writing!

[pre]We all have moments of lonesome. Those moments that we fear the most are those of loneliness and helplessness. I too fear them. But then I think of the following ...

[pre]When the winds blow cold, I think of the warm day we met... When the fire warms me, I think of your love warming my heart... Everything I say to ...