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Sahib the Scribe

  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Chemistry

    I will definitely try to clarify the punctuation. Thank you for your review and kind words!

    Apr 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Chemistry

    Thank you for reading and reviewing!

    Apr 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Chemistry

    Thank you for the kind words and the review!

    Apr 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Elegy of a Dream

    Thank you for the kind words and the review!

    Apr 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Elegy of a Dream

    Thank you so much for the review! I will work on clarifying rhyme

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Elegy of a Dream

    Yes! That's exactly what it was about! Thank you for the review! I think you're a little better at this poetry stuff than you would like to think haha

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Elegy of a Dream

    Thank you so much!

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Chemistry

    Thank you for the review!

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Chemistry

    Thank you so much for the review! It was specifically a mental health poem but I added the self harm aspect as an emphasis on the pain the character is ...

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lost an' Found

    Really evocative language and I appreciate the varied use of "hid" and "hidden" (I am assuming that was purposeful). Reminds me a lot of my mom :') Great poem

    Jul 14, 2016


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