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Hi there! This is a very nice poem, but don't you think you should add a full stop espically in the last line. I am not a very good critique ...

Hi! The poem is really amazing I like the rhyme scheme in it. I'm a bad critique so I just have a long list of compliments! :D Anyways, I really ...

Hi there! The poem you wrote is really amazing It brings out a lot of emotion. I actually almost started crying reading you can imagine how real it feels. I ...

Smile :D I walked beneath the starry sky, Tears trickling down my eyes, I'd never felt so sad before. I sat under my favourite tree, I always went there when ...

hey! Great poem. the poem feels real and enchanting. I especially like the last line :D

thnx for suggestions!!!!!! and for the welcome I will implement the suggestions in my next poem :)

Friends Forever.... I felt alone, the rhythm of a sad song, Then you came along, Took my hand, Said you'd be my friend, You'd be there for me, Made me ...