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I actually agree with basically everything you said so thanks. Well I have an idea for a story so I just sort of started off into it although I admit ...

I don't like this poem anymore lol. It's definately not my best so goooodbye poem.

Please let me know what you think:D

I wrote this there now, it's just the start to something I'm working on, i'm sure it needs plenty of editingbut see what you think... Katie Hansen squinted at the ...

I'm not sure about some of the metaphorical description such as "glistened with diamonds" while it sounds nice I don't know if it's quite right. HOWEVER, i enjoyed the poem, ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem, it's origional yet reminiscent of classic poems from the past. The only part which I have any issue is "I am being eaten from ...