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This story so far was interesting and I can't wait for more, but I would have liked some more description. Tell the reader more of the world in the story, ...

Thanks for the review I'll try to keep these things in mind when i post another story. To answer why she didn't kill everyone is that she is so sure ...

I liked this but I have to agree with Kaedee, the characters could have done more to liven things up.

This was very well written, I felt sorry for the Sarah character and I enjoyed reading this whole thing. I think you should do more with this story or maybe ...

I did enjoy the kind of detail put into this, and the sudden transition from light to dark. The ending was interesting but could have been a little better though.