rygel

Hello all I'm rygel. I am kinda new to this site although I have posted things before, you may have read them I don't know. Anyway I just wanted to ...

I liked this but I have to agree with Kaedee, the characters could have done more to liven things up.

The bar was nearly empty, close to being deserted in fact. Those who had stayed were the ones as empty inside as the bar was to leave until told or ...

These pictures are amazing! The detail on them is great, but I don't understand why you put the last one in although I guess you have a good reason. Thanks ...

It is hard to see what I am looking at but the shading and all that was fantastic

I love the pictures, the focus and the angles are great but, although I love it, i'm not sure why you did the fourth one. It seems pointless to put ...

This was very well written, I felt sorry for the Sarah character and I enjoyed reading this whole thing. I think you should do more with this story or maybe ...

The story for me was intersting, I like the idea of the comet and the Colour Decrease and all that. But I think you should have explained things in some ...

The night sky was clear and still. The city was quiet but for the occasional bang from a car horn or shout from an angry lone pedestrian. Atop one of ...

I did enjoy the kind of detail put into this, and the sudden transition from light to dark. The ending was interesting but could have been a little better though.

are people allowed to kill their own characters

This did indeed interest me, left me wanting more from it. I think you should make more of this like another chapter for it. There was a few things i ...

In my opinion this is a great attempt at fantasy but it doesn't really give me the sense of danger you were (i'm guessing) trying to show. When the demon ...

".... War is coming ...." ".... We are all that's left ...." ".... We need to find a new home ...." 3 April 2171 - This is the personal log ...