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First off these pictures are great! The first one is fantastic with its colour and scope and everything, the second, though still great, could have been done at a different ...

This thing is both confusing and interesting at the same time. I mean I sort of get the whole idead; it's about a man examining his life, but it's just ...

This was a good story, you should expand this alot more. Maybe give more description to the characters and the background to why this situation happened. I like that you ...

I love both True Blood and Buffy. True Blood is something worth watching over and over but unfortunately for me I can't see season 3 of it on TV since ...

Vampire stories are starting to appeal to me so I thought I'd read this, so glad I did this is a great read. The story was good as was the ...

This is an interesting read but for me it was a bit too short and simplified. I think you should have given some more detail to what the main character ...

For me choosing the best book i've read is difficult since I have read alot of books, but off the top of my head I would have to say The ...

Hi LittlePrincess, welcome to the site. Thanks for reviewing. Plus what is the name of your story, I might want to read it.

To start off with I don't like starting a review with the bad things but for this I think i should. First I think the beginning sentence could be reworded, ...

you know you're right that is scary

I know that Peanutgallery007 has already said this but it does seem more of a poem than a short story, was that intentional or a mistake. Also the basic plot ...

Hello to everyone. Thanks for the welcome and so far I have enjoyed writing on this site. My favorite medium is short stories but i may try others like maybe ...

Thanks for the review I'll try to keep these things in mind when i post another story. To answer why she didn't kill everyone is that she is so sure ...

The worst book I've ever read was... Debatable Space. I can't remember the author's name since it has been so long since I read it. The characters were too basic ...

I think you got the whole Lucy being envious of Kate thing down perfectly, that was great. But in my opinion I think you should have gone a little bit ...