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Re: Nightfall
it was short, but amazing- really. i liked how you said so much in the paragraph right after he tells her he loves her. your descriptions are nicely detailed. i ...
Mar 12, 2008 -
Re: The Twins: A Fairytale
you didn't give anyone a name, so that part was hard to follow since you had to keep describing the twins. but i too looove the Grimm Brothers, and i ...
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: Eighteen Falling Stars
The night of 18 falling stars Only 7 more crashed cars. As I'm finding the words You're running away... What force on earth Will make you stay? And I’m turning ...
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: Trying Not to Blink
Standing on the corner Always looking in. Standing there, I fought to wonder What do I see in him? An epic battle rages inside of me A battlefield I’ll be ...
Mar 11, 2008
