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rustymenon

  • Narrative Poetry Re: World Water Day

    I suppose at school towards the earth I am the most greener, I thought this line is grammatically wrong. You should correct it. The soil had just been watered, it ...

    Sep 28, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: @@@@@@@@@@@@ :)

    What I liked in the poem was the idea. I liked how you just picked up the small symbol and made a poem out of it. A good effort, but ...

    Sep 28, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Big Mistake

    cool. chiller. a thriller. Thats what 'The Big Mistake' is. Its scary. Its like a R.L. Stine piece. Not very scary, but a twist, and with an engrossing story that ...

    Sep 26, 2009
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Twilight : The real story

    good one. I haven't read twilight, but my sister told me everything I needed to know. You should cut down the abuses. I'm only 11 ... Keep it up!(not the ...

    Sep 26, 2009


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