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Re: ~*~The Dawn of War~*~
Story/Plot- War is on the horizon. Between, not two countries but two races. Two human races. Ten years ago an unknown virus entered the food stream. Whether intentionally or not, ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: Secrett Seregreen <edited>prologue & chapter 1
First I love you're signature! My cuz quotes Forrest Gump all the time! Okay back to the review thing, sorry I get destracted quiet often. I love this story! You're ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: Dipped in ink.
This was really nice. I think it could use a little work but it could totally work with a little effort in the right places. First off the MC's I'm ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: Turning The Knives 6
Wow, this is really good! I love how right at first the action keeps me on the edge of my seat. The story is really fast pace and leaves me ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: Welcome to Project Blackwing
Ooc/ Sorry if i'm messing things up but, could the back up crew start now?
Sep 9, 2009 -
Re: Welcome to Project Blackwing
Name: Alex Wells Age: 17 Code number: W174225 Why she can't return to society: Alex is perfectly fine mentally, but she has life threatening seizures and temporary blindness. Often she ...
Sep 9, 2009 -
Re: Welcome to Project Blackwing
Hey i'm gonna join as soon as I get a profile i'd like to be one of the scouts.
Sep 9, 2009 -
Re: Preface_My_Story
Hiya! I really liked the opening to your story! I am trying this new thing where I go over the three main elements of a story so here goes. 1~ ...
Aug 1, 2009 -
Re: Western Romance. Please reveiw.
Hiya, this is a small bit of the romantic western I'm writing for my mom. It's christian Fic. The harsh wind blew against the walls of the small cabin, shaking ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: What would you do...if you had that kind of power...
Thank you all for your help! I must say that I have not gone over these very well so there will be mistakes. With the comma's I am so sorry, ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: The Awakening...
Omg! I hate my computer, somehow my sister *Mutters about how to kill her* did something and made it auto correct the barely to barley cause she was writing or ...
May 13, 2009 -
Re: Mrs Jones - Chapter 4
I really like this story, I feel like I know Amanda. Very good writing. Keep it up Keira
May 12, 2009 -
Re: Review Gallery
Hey! I would love it if you told me what you thought of a entry I've wrote for a contest. Link is It's pg-13 I think it is not bad, ...
May 12, 2009 -
Re: The Awakening...
I do believe this is my entry for the Forest Setting Contest, but not totally sure. Tell me what you think? Would love to have some reviews. ***********************************************************
May 12, 2009 -
Re: What would you do...if you had that kind of power...
Okay, thanks a bunch! And that folks is all I need, one person saying "More" and here it is. “Well we are here, Jake and Kate’s foster home , the ...
May 11, 2009
