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Re: First Love
haha i agree. i have found i fall in love with all of my friends!
Sep 21, 2009 -
Re: Drug Addicts
yeah so i guess you could say i might know the affects of smoking weed. baha uhm, it is not a bad experience, only whn you mix it with drinking, ...
Sep 20, 2009 -
Re: but i love her anyways.
really short, but is one of my favorite pieces i ever wrote. But… I Love Her Anyway I watch her as she sits, eating her nonexistent meal. No, really, she ...
Sep 20, 2009 -
Re: Tell Me What You Want, and I'll Tell You What You Need.
thanks for your comment. i agree with you on the diagnosis part. i looked up average times for diagnosis of Leukemia, and it said between 60's 70's, and it didnt ...
Sep 20, 2009 -
Re: Tell Me What You Want, and I'll Tell You What You Need.
This is a rewrite of a previous work of mine called "It Calls To Me". Please dont read that one, its horrible ! okay now for the good one, atleast ...
Sep 20, 2009 -
Re: First Love
Im pretty sure i can relate to this poem. My first love was my a dear friend. Although when i tell people about our story, and they try to tell ...
Sep 20, 2009 -
Re: another side (temp. title)
Hey, is this Haley? lol. if it is, its sam, and if it isnt im sorry about this. i loved it. I was on teh verge of crying, seriously. Its ...
Sep 20, 2009 -
Re: Drive Through.
it sounds like it could be good, but you pulled a 'war of the worlds'. you jumped into the fun part too fast. I cant imagine anything in my mind. ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: It Calles To Me
It Calls to Me Fuck my life, was all that was running though Elsa’s mind on the stormy Sunday afternoon that was her birthday. It was bad enough to spend ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: DreamLand
thanks for your feedback. i was beginging to think no one would like it. haha i really liked the concept too. the problem witht he rushing in places came because ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: DreamLand
You may not get it yet, because its the first chapter, so dont judge the plot too harshly. Even i got confused writing it. I have worked with this same ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: Running With Wolves
i really lied it! usually when i start reading stories on this website I get bored right at the start, but i really didn't with yours! i think you wrote ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: Last year i decided to kill myself - a short story
okay a few things: when i read it, it felt like a had read this before. oh wait, i have. a basic boyfriend dies, girlfriend commits suicide story doesn't exactly ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: The incredible journey
i liked it, but i honestly would suggest changing the perspective of your story. if you are going to have different chapters int eh view of other characters, they should ...
Jul 27, 2009 -
Re: To Stand By the Moon
To Stand By the Moon When I was a child, my mother told me a story. This story had been passed down from my great, great grandmother, who lived the ...
Jul 27, 2009
