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Okay, this is what i believe. From a religious stand point.. if people are going to go to hell for being gay, or having sex before their married, or anything ...

I can honestly say that I don't think we will change... If global warming is true. I believe that the earth changes, weather patterns, the way of life. I think ...

I feel rushed, the whole thing just seemed extremly rushed. I like the idea behind the dream lovers, wouldn't it be nice to dream of the person your supposed to ...

Okayyyy, first I feel like I have to praise you. This is a very good story, it's original and i think if you work on it, it'll be a good ...

Really amazing!!! Great foundation for a great story. I'm just curious how old the twins are, they seem kinda young? But I'll keep reading in a bit! Really good!!!! Your ...

Too much talking, but not enough details. But I love the story, great foundation and great story line. I really like your characters and Maddie's need for him. Makes me ...

Hey there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression. How many times have I ran down this trail? Too many times to count, ...

I thought it was great, a little grammar blah blah blah but you know what I think you have a good foundation for a great story =) I can't wait ...

I thought it was really good. A few grammer and spelling errors but i thought it was brilliant. Your writing style is good, solid. I'd like to see a little ...

I thought it was beautiful. The way you discribed the girl, wasn't over done, it was just right. The way you started your story was brilliant, I thought. It was ...

So, heres what I thought. It was good, needs a lot of work but don't start editing yet until you got a good foundation. There was a lot, jumping, set ...

Your main characters seems lost, in more ways then one but i think she's supposed to be right? I'm excited to read more =) I think you have a good ...

Dont edit it until your done =) Otherwise everything was great, your characters are strong, distinct. Which is good. It got a little confusing, a little, dull at times but ...

I don't know why, but it made me really sad. I think it's because it reminds me of my faliure. Weird, i know =)

Hey everyone, so this is some work I started about a year ago, and I wasn't going to finish it, I was actaully going to delete it, but I wanted ...