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Oooooooo it's....creepy. ^^ I respect that. it'd be better if there weren't so many grammar/spelling errors, I just had to say that. And it'd be nice if there was more ...

I'm back with a new one, this one I started a few months ago, forgot all about it, I really thought it was a great idea when I started, but ...

Okay firstly, your writing is really good, I didn't really have any problems with the way you write. But as a mother myself I would just like to correct a ...

It sounds really cool, but it's kinda short. I don't even know what really happened there. All I know is Jeannie lives on a beautiful island without parents, she loves ...

I really liked the ending. Lilah's true feelings are out, you get a sense of the bitter feelings that were left behind from Luke. I think when you wrote 'I ...

The realm of darkness was my open tomb, stretching miles from around me. The black blended together, swallowing me whole, killing me softly. A purple glow beamed off the ground, ...

I was just looking through my things on my computer and found this. I don't really know where it's going, but I'm going to post it all the same. I'll ...

Loved it! Well, i don't really know what it's about yet but ether way I loved it. Your writing is great, it's interesting, I didn't find any boring parts. It ...

You should be a tattoo artist. =)

You know I love the trees more then the sunset. They make me cold, and I love that feeling. The trees are bare and cold an I think the sunset ...

I loved the first two pictures, i didn't think they were out of focus but photos and art aren't my fortay. But I loved all your picutes. The frog was ...

Where is his glasses? He's not Ben without those glasses =) --- I love it!

It was a little hard to read but I really enjoyed it. I want to know more, I want to know more about the characters, about the other world, about ...

Haha wow I loved that. I'm sorta hungry now. But wow that was witty and funny, and I've never really read anything like that. Smart =)

Ha wow what a change in direction. I find your character kinda crude, but I suppose all men think like that. And you know what I really liked your character, ...