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I think it was really good, unique yet classic all at once. I loved the irony, and I loved your characters, they were strong, and the story has a great ...

What a cute story! I just saw Harry Potter last night, so this was just what i needed!

aw this story hurt my scottish feelings! You know, I thought it was the other way around, the english were always hurting the scottish, but every story has two sides. ...

Overall I think this chapter was OK. It's a little, confusing at times. The character names are so hard to remember and sound so a like sometimes i have to ...

Lots of action, it was great! I am so curious though, there is so much happening and so many unanswered questions. I think in the first chapter you said they ...

I hate Jesse,I don't know him, but I don't like him. He sounds like controling, and that makes me nervous for Lilah. I hope Lucas punching him to the moon! ...

Liam, one of my favourite names! Welcome to YWS! We are happy to have you! If you have any questions or just feel like having a chat PM me! Steph!

Hey Loony! Welcome to YWS! It's great to have you here! Im Steph, I also love to write so we have that in common. If you need any help or ...

Okay, Firstly I am not going to put you down and make you feel crappy about your work. Your young and I wasn't even writing at thirteen so don't give ...

Okay so it sounds like your MC is irish yet, the soilder sounds irish aswell. Huh. Anyways I really liked it, I am a catholic and my family comes from ...

Hey everyone. Usually I write fantasy love stories, but I started this while I was on vacation and I think I have a good story[color=#FF0000]right here is where I got ...

It is short but your detail is nice. I would love to see more, all I really got was that your character just moved, I like the pov i think ...

Hey everyone. Usually I write fantasy love stories, but I started this while I was on vacation and I think I have a good story. I think a lot of ...

Amazing. This story is so real and the foundation is so strong, It can go anywere. I can't believe Luke is all grown up and I know he's still in ...

Howdy It looks like it has a lot of promise, it looks like a rather good foundation. I am a little confused though, like who the characters are so I ...